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promise
one guy talking. no blocking, no reference.
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Angelica White
Lip sync could use some work, but I like the acting choices.
Adam Bartholomew
Not bad, but I think doing a lot more with the eyelids as he changes expression would have improved it massively!
Leah M
Man..
Nothing like reminiscing of better things while doing work. I like the motion of him setting the wagon down on the ground. And wiping his head assumingely of sweat from all the work before going on a rant.
I think a small thing I’d change is right after wiping his head his hand gets really close. I think its meant to be a scratch but doesn’t quite come off as one. But this fit the audio and turned out
J.K. Riki
It's a good start! Right now it has a lot of extra gestures you probably don't need. If you cut some of the hand movements it will make the other choices stronger. Good luck and keep at it! :)