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An emotional speech
He wants her to know that he can be the man that he used to be, she has her doubts but loves him nonetheless.
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McKinley C
I'd love to see more annunciation in the lip syncs. these renders are gorgeous
Sam Larson
Very nice acting with both characters! Natural!
olivia hartanto
this is just my taste, but seeing only the face of the character till the end of the animation kinda bored me.
Leah M
tense
It looks like we came right after a fight where he's trying to calm the situation down. The lip syncing is really good and i like the moment when she slightly squints her eyes at him while closing her mouth. The lighting is really nice as well very smooth and blended well with the characters. Niceeee
I think something to edit would be the shots though I do like the first two angles they feel a little too close to the camera. I also think rather than switching back to the guu the angle could be a little different, like an over the shoulder kind of shot
J.K. Riki
Wonderful job on the composition of your shots! Really well done, connecting the audience to the characters. Great choice on the camera cut as well. Overall that is solid, solid stuff. Little more polish on the lip sync and you'll have a standout piece, good job!