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A pointless argument

by Jasmine Ashley Goh

Final Rating: 4.82. Finished #48 out of 79 entries.

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Experience

student

Time Taken

4 weeks

Description

A student who is a hardcore believer in myths suddenly starts an argument with his biology teacher when he was asked to film a plant lifecycle as an assignment. though, in the end, both of them don't know why they even argued about it in the first place.

Comments

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Isaiah Hoeninghaus

The characters could shift their weight around more. When moving the torso dramatically the feet have to move a little to make sure the body stays balanced.

Maria

Lovely dramatics, and a science schoolroom makes a lot of sense for this argument. The student's ending gesture is great.

Ben Zingo

seems like you could have really benefited from using FK instead of IK. The hands seems to stick/float in place

Max

There’s some stuff that’s working but also a bit going against your piece. It doesn’t look like their hips really move much which deadens them quite a bit. Be careful of where their eyes are looking too. if the first character is looking up because he’s thinking, I’d maybe have them move around more. I really like what the second character is doing at around frame 214 though. That’s really nice!