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News Story

by Jose Velasquez

Final Rating: 3.85. Finished #74 out of 79 entries.

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Animator

Jose Velasquez

Experience

7 years

Time Taken

30 hours

Description

Two men brainstorm their next big news story.

Tags
2D

Comments

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Max

I like the idea and the fluidity! I think the character could do with a bit more movement and extreme posing, especially considering the tone with which the characters are talking. I’d be really excited to see it finish though!

Maria

A newsroom is a very cool setting for this clip. I like the personalities inherent in these two, and the counting hand is well done and elegant.

Henryk Jachimczyk

A good beginning. The seated character has crossed the camera line-of-action for his individual shots.