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Shower Thoughts
by Jason
Description
I'm on vacation and wasn't able to render, so here's a playlist so my work can at least be critiqued
Comments
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Isaiah Hoeninghaus
The Key Poses are great, but the 180 degree rule was broken for the final shot which it makes the scene confusing.
Max
She’s beautiful, Jay. I would just say to watch out for the 180 degree rule. In the first shot he’s looking screen right and in the second he’s looking screen left and it was a bit disorientating. I love how well you do the successive breaking of joints and drag with arms especially. It’s So well done.