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"Oh, okay...."
by Susannah N.
Description
The secretary at a studio chatting with the man who walks in.
Comments
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Odelys A.
The animation’s highlights would be the shot changes and the hands for their nearly realistic movements. Despite displaying pleasant lines, I feel the concept, angles, solidness, and lip sync would need further room for improvement. Additionally, try including more squash and stretch, particularly after “hello” and during “oh, okay.” Nice work.
SONNY-LENNOX BENNETT
The animation of the Hands... WOW! <3
Serg
I think you could improve the lipsync here.