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by Andres
Description
This is my first time posting a project here, and it's also the first time I've spent so much time animating a scene. It has been a fabulous and fun experience.
Comments
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Samuel Alejandro Zamarrón González
lipsync can be improved, and the animation too
Odelys A.
The setting and characters stand out, but the animation and lip sync would need more exaggeration to emphasize with the story. Perhaps you could add more squash and stretch to the body movements and darken the lighting for darker storytelling. Other than that, I really like the smoke, which sums to the second character’s personality.