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Cook Ninja !

by Melanie Fumey

Final Rating: 4.42. Finished #55 out of 100 entries.

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Animator

Melanie Fumey

Experience

3 years (school)

Time Taken

~2 weeks

Description

Let's see how a ninja used to cook !

Hope you'll like it

(It isn't a rendering. I just put some lights in viewport 2.0 to be more understandable and don't have black walls for example)

Comments

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Vera Steinbeck

this is by far the best idea :D

Anne Fumey

Very original idea !!!!

Louis Renard

I still like the second half much more than the first. The jump and the first pan hit are too jerky...

Saeho Oh

try to match the sound effect to the motion. good idea. try new camera settings.

Christopher Lovejoy

not sure if the cook is excellent or pitiful. The initial chime seems accidental, as does the breaking of the cabinet. But on rewatching I think it's meant to appear skillful, but overkill. I think if you show the cook's head and gaze anticipate the next action a little bit, it would appear that they know what they're doing.