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Final Fight
by Anurag Sahu
The fight between ATM security and theft
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[user]
crazy set - a funky car, a church and a chair?
Khursheed Alam Khan
Need to improve animation........study animation
Jim P
Good. I don't see the last "cling"- it gets lost with that last kick.
Danny Kneip
Crossing your line of action rarely works and is disruptive right from the beginning. The chair is going through Orange Stewart, which is a problem.
Karine Couture Bienvenue
The way the camera moves left me a bit disoriented at some parts
Christopher Lovejoy
pretty good balance and weight, until that last kick; that came out of nowhere. Which could be cool, but it lacks impact. If you want to emphasize how instantaneous the kick is, maybe you could still have the instant change at the beginning (which I think is probably not best, but I don't know a better way), and then have a little follow through at the end: instantaneous to the surface of the red guy's body, but maybe 6 frames follow through BEHIND where his body was.
Abhishek tiwari
not much of animation to see.