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The Romantibot
A lady comes home early and catches her romantibot off gaurd.
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Joe Darko
haha cool moves stewart!
Paris Hall
I really enjoyed the idea, man!
Blond
i like the idea, nice job
Eric Buval
I like the idea. This didn't come out too bad! You could use a better handle on the fundamentals. Your timing/spacing is not great; a bit clunky/inconsistent
Jim P
i watched 5 times. that last "ping"- i can't see the sword make contact on que. Original idea.
Patrick
So good. But the spray bit at the end is unclear and confusing. Had the potential to be the best this month, but just a few are ahead of it I think. The sliding whilst cutting is brilliant btw.
Sergane Sariani
nice idea, but more expressions on the face, and cleaner animations, clean poses so we know what's going on, the action is fast so it must be clear :)
kishan Rathod
haha !! funny concept ..
Guillaume Gimbert
Ha ha ha!
Danny Kneip
Fresh idea and well animated! I wish Stewart was in a spotlight at the end because it's hard to see him - there's also an unfortunate shadow from the beam running across the floor which doesn't help.
Benjamin Berg
Looking good! I would say that the ending could use some more work and creativity.
Christopher Lovejoy
I love that the chunky splattering sound accompanies a romantic table setting appearing. The last shot only suffers from lighting a bit. I really enjoyed it. Watching for a 3rd time. Perhaps the initial movement should have given a hint that he's heard his date at the door; as it is he appears to decide to start his dance without any reason.
Anthony Fong
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