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The Traps

by Rafael Espinosa

Final Rating: 2.44. Finished #98 out of 100 entries.

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Animator

Rafael Espinosa

Experience

1 year learning animation

Time Taken

3 weeks and a half

Description

the character must past several traps and obstacles to the finish

Comments

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Aaron Rivera

Fun concept but the movements are so jerky and awkward looking that it just doesn't work.

Caitlin Cooke

Good idea but looks like you needed a little more time

Alex

Stewart pops horribly in most places of this animation - much more work is needed in blocking stage and also clean up to complete this obstacle course.

Danny Kneip

A lot of time spent on the gimmick (the trap doors and such) and not enough on the actual animation of the character. I actually like the initial move, with the jagged edge about to come down on his neck, but the movement is quite sloppy after that point.

Sergane Sariani

nope, not at all, not even a little,