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Spaghetti Western Wizard Fight
by Lauren
A gentlemen's duel between wizard cowboys.
Comments
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Kiran Jay Babla
Kinda cool but I had to watch a few times to fully understand what was happening!
Natalie Wilkinson
The lack of faces coupled with the backs turned to the camera makes the viewer feel disconnected from your piece.
Jonathan C.
Nice animation but I don't think the motions really fit in with the sound effects.
Aaron Rivera
I can't really tell what's going on, but the animation seems smooth. I think the body shapes and timing need work, as there are parts where things happen too fast, and the body shapes seem to change, like when the green guy turns on the ground. Also, if the green guy is pinned on the floor, why does the red guy shoot straight in front of him? Also, most of the sounds aren't even used in the animation. It's a neat looking animation but doesn't work well as an entry.
Patrick
Its hard to see what's going on in this. Would have been great to see a more finished version as it looks like you are a good draughtsman.
Danny Kneip
Off to an interesting start, but it's very difficult to figure out what's really going on here at first blush. The overhead shot starting around F17 doesn't work because the scale/perspective is off. Still, a decent attempt.
Sergane Sariani
what is going on ??
Matthew Kenyon
Couldn't tell what was happening.
Erin King
Really beautiful cinematography.
Moby
Dramatic
Saeho Oh
try to match the sound effects.