« Back to June 2014 Competition
Hard Training
3 years in school
3 weeks 5 days kinda still working on it
keep training and pushing yourself to higher limits and before you know it your efforts will take you through the roof
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Melanie Fumey
The camera movement is very hard to follow, and mess me a little. Maybe it is missing some anticipation/reactions of your movements but still a good animation :)
Kiran Jay Babla
Bit floaty...
Louis Renard
Those camera movements are so random, I can't really check the animation properly. but some actions seem really soft
Caitlin Cooke
A little more weight to the movements would make this a lot more polished
Cuck Man
The entire animation was floaty. Try to add some weight to the character to make it more believable.
Benjamin Berg
I don't really understand what the story behind this is supposed to be. The jump through the floor needs more work. I would push the poses more on the launch and landing. Also, I would remove the slow motion at the end. It makes the animation feel off.
Danny Kneip
The camera movement is very distracting.
Sergane Sariani
It's pretty good, but there is something wrond with the feet near the end
Vijith
He's gliding in frames 219-230.
Christopher Lovejoy
A little less in/out movement of the camera would help a bit.