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Wedding Planner
Description
someone who is worried about his contract with the wedding planner
Comments
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Juan Carlos Vigil
I think you need to work a lot more on improving the expressions and the overall movement of the characters, they look very "floaty"
Ethan Gettman
You only have 11 seconds -- don't make the audience guess what the situation is. Remember the 3rd principle of animation: Staging.