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my contract
by Qinqing Wang
Description
big day
Comments
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Ben Zettl
needs a few passes on lip sync spoken words do not match the mouth/facial movements.
Iverson
This is really good! I know if you had more time this would be totally complete!
Ethan Gettman
You only have 11 seconds -- don't make the audience guess what the situation is. Is this principal/teacher? Boss/worker?
Roshan Pinto
there are shrinking of hands .. here and there.. but i still like it :)
Roger Crown
ahhhhhh...yea..like frame 88 or thereof is not getting the male smaller without a crosscut to her...and she getulates a bit tooooooooooooooooooo much ...at the end.
Simon Edwards
Watch the head volumes!





