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the truth

by Romain Perrault

Final Rating: 4.39. Finished #60 out of 174 entries.

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Animator

Romain Perrault

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

3h per day during 10 days

Description

I didn't spend much time on this animation but it was fun :)
please make any critic you would like to say in order to improve my skills.
thanks

Comments

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Drew White

The lip-synching is really good, and I like the woman's hand gestures. I suggest doing some work on a background.

Brendan Hanrahan

Good poses, arcs look nice, just make sure your holds aren't too static. Push the idle movements between actions a little more and your piece will look much more fluid. Good work!

Niels Koper

Need some work on the face expressions. Especially the last dialoque of the female. Let the face match te words.