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Sperm Donor
Description
A guy has some questions before to give some..
Comments
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Ben Zettl
Lacks a lot of accent defining in-betweens.
Roger Crown
errr huh,,,how many char's are there in this piece, and why did you not use a model sheet for the 2nd womans hands, which are waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to small for the body of which she is.
grade = 5 of the so-so catagory due to the above comments.
Kurt Rush
You broke the 180-degree rule.
Lea
Some confusion about the characters and their relation to each other in space here. Animation is nice though, especially on the first woman.
Mojtaba Moazami Godarzi