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first day at the liberary
by Bhanu Kaura
Description
a boy's first day at the job ..
Comments
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Rahul Semwal
Very Nice...:)
Lea
Beware using pursed lips to often. It's also rather distracting that you rarely see the characters' teeth as they're talking. There's potential in here, but it gets a bit lost in the sheer amount of movements.





