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So offensive.

by TJ Askew

Final Rating: 3.97. Finished #68 out of 131 entries.

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Animator

TJ Askew

Experience

None

Time Taken

20-25 hours.

Description

I didn't get the refinement that I wanted out of it, but I think the idea reads through pretty clearly.

Comments

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praveenkv

animation is good .. but i think the other female character ( the one with freaking face standing next to the male character) is not really necessary in this shot..

Jyrki Kanto

For clarity, avoid crossing the line of action.
http://i.stack.imgur.com/Huylb.jpg

Pallav Sharma

i think pink lady has only just blinked her eyes I MEAN THERE WAS LESS MOVEMENTS ON HER

Eddie Higgenbottom

This is a little more interesting need some background

Alex Ang

That third girl only blinks nothing more, If you're gonna add a character they are gonna have to be alive

Richard Adams

It wold be a lot better if the girl in purple weren't completely immobile except for eyeblinks. Or just don't have her in the animation at all.

Szilard Hadobas

IK arms :D