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A strange tip
by Michael
Many thanks to the makers of Mery and Malcolm rig. Trying out a more subtle performance hoping to tie in with the delivery of the dialogue. Hope you all enjoy.
Comments
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Harry Roger Smith
Everything is nice and smooth, however the hand actions on the lady don't quite work for me. You've tried to do too many poses in too short of a space of time and it comes across as a bit muddled.
Kartikey
great work!
Alex Ang
You're hitting each mouth shape right on the dialogue which is impossible for people to do with their mouths in normal conversation. look at yourself in the mirror as you recite the dialogue at regular speed and you'll see what I mean.
To fix it you pick the mouth shapes that matter the most to give the dialogue and you fudge all of the others
Eddie Higgenbottom
not too much a normal environment.
Sabrina Winkel
Story line hit downhill there. Wasn't impressed at all
Samidha Kumar
nice idea :)
Szilard Hadobas
I like the poses a lot! I feel the character parts stop from time to time. They should live all along the shot.