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Sudden Meeting
Mixing dialogue
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Marcus Taylor
If you're looking to cut your camera angles, I'd suggest using the 180 degree rule so the changes aren't too jarring.
Adam Ellwanger
Look into the 180 degree camera rule. This will help for your future shots with creating continuity.
Ken Ackerman
lose the unnecessary camera flopping
Jyrki Kanto
It's not advisable to jump from one side to another with the camera. (Frame 0 vs frame 100)
Kartikey
It needs a lot facial work, the movement of some body parts could be more.. um better.
Alex Ang
to animate dialogue its more in the lips and less in the jaw
Erin Goddard
Camera jumps and cuts were quite confusing to watch. be careful of the 180 degree rule. Things like that easily distract from the animation itself. keep at it!
Richard Adams
Very floaty, poor lip syncing. A sure sign you're letting the computer do too much of the in-betweening work.