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Indian Accent-Master of None

by Matthew Remer

Final Rating: 2.87. Finished #110 out of 131 entries.

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Animator

Matthew Remer

Experience

I am a student right now

Time Taken

got a late start due to school, so i worked on it for a couple weeks during break.

Description

A man applying for a acting job but needs to do the act in an Indian accent.

Comments

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Marcus Taylor

The camera should probably be around the other side of the second man to help sell it's a different character.

Jyrki Kanto

Because the camera crossed the line of action, it looks like the guy is talking to himself. Alone. But maybe that was the point?
http://i.stack.imgur.com/Huylb.jpg

Szilard Hadobas

You break the 180 degree rule, so now it seems the scene has one character with personality disorder. Also don't forget that is anything moves of the character all body moves a little.