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the audition
3 years as a student / 1 year in the industry
late nights and spare time during 3 weeks
An audition in a silly costume
My first submission here!
Comments
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Jonathan McKimmel
The characters really match the audio, and the concept is really funny XD good job
Mariana Patsi
Nice animation and i like how he pops out of the costume!
Harry Roger Smith
Some of the actions feel a teeny bit over the top and don't 100% match the tone of the dialogue (particularly the action around f90, bit too much for my liking!) But apart from that, I really love this! Loads of energy and flows really nicely. Good stuff.
Pallav Sharma
wow
pluto
the girl character should try to keep eyecontact with the other character when she addressing him,
Andrew Tan
That mascot is from External World! Her arm swing motion around 70-80 ish is too big, instead you can make that motion smaller, and she can get to her arm crossed pose sooner, so we can see her arm crossed pose longer, right now feels like the cam cuts away from her too soon. Overall is pretty good!
Szilard Hadobas
Nicely done!! However I don't get the huge move of the girl on the "but this time", and the hand move is also overexaggerated on the "accent".