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Robot movie casting
by William
Jeff the robot wanna be a bollywood actor.
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todd harry
There is a lot of motion on both characters at all times. try to bring in some moving holds. Both characters feel like they are moving very quickly and emphasizing all parts of the dialogue. Think of moving holds as negative space, an art piece with no negative space is very hard to take in and understand, the same can be said about motion.
Ken Ackerman
very terry gilliam
Jyrki Kanto
Nice render! The camerawork is quite jumpy.
Nate
Lighting and rending is amazing. The animation could use a lot of work though.
Sabrina Winkel
Everything is ok except movement and lip sync
Szilard Hadobas
Nice render doesn't help on the animation. Spend that time on the anim next time!