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Indian Accent?
by Tim Frinzi
4 years; Getting my bachelor in Spring 2017
18 days; 2 to 3 hours a day
This is my first time putting my animation in the 11 Second Club. Feedback/Critiques would be great!
Comments
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John
You did a good job of conveying emotion :) I feel like you need to do some more work on the lip sync. Also, I don't really understand why he jumps forward when he says "... that voice, is that okay?" so maybe you should make that movement less jarring.
Harry Roger Smith
So close! All your poses are there, the foundations for a strong animation are there, but your timing and spacing needs a lot of improvement. Everything feels like it's under-water!
Szilard Hadobas
Little energy-saving choice, but that can be still good if you tweak the eyebrows at 120F and break up the twinned poses. Also add some anticipation. Maybe more snappiness also would help..