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We Are Not Amused

by Apsari Marsha Saraswati

Final Rating: 3.42. Finished #86 out of 131 entries.

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Experience

almost to none, still studying at uni

Time Taken

roughly 2 days

Description

Maybe this job isn't fit for him after all...

Crown by sonumonu at Roblox
Textures are from deviantArt and google images haul long ago

Comments

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Jyrki Kanto

The camera movement is unnecessary and weird. But I like the acting, especially the queen.

Szilard Hadobas

The initial pose of the jester is something we don't get from this camera. make sure the silhouette is always readable. There is also a strange camera move.. Break up the pose changes, and make sure there is anticipation/action/reaction in the moves, because now they feel little robotic.