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Final Rating: 6.37. Finished #8 out of 80 entries.

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Animator

Alen Burazerovic

Experience

4 years

Time Taken

Week and a half in my spare time

Description

N/A

Comments

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najar faicel

nice animation!!

Michaela Wadzinski

This is great! I think some more use of moving holds would help it be even better

Charity Santos

wow!

Ben Hall

You need more poses here so it's not just talking heads

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui

must me be top 3 !

Ruben Uggla

Its really well made. Something that I did notice though was that whenever one of the character aren't talking, the amount of movement they make is dropped simnifically compared to when they talk. Maybe they could move a bit less when they are talking, especially person 1's head.

Laurence Magennis

hand on the shoulder is wrong it looks like the hand comes out of the shoulder

Brian W.

This is really good. Animation is great, timing is decent. However, animators also need to tell stories, and this is about as context-free as it gets with not even a badge or a prop to suggest who these people are. As good as you are technically, you also need to transcend the audio clip and give the viewer more than what the audio alone provides in the way of story.