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Come On Man
by Ben Hall
Description
A guy with an outlaw name gets an insensitive response.
Comments
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Ruben Uggla
I think my man problem is how the second guy just appears out of nowhere, it becomes even more confusing when they all where the same outfit. Many establish the third person by showing him a bit offscreen, in the first scene, and maybe have a different character model.





