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A Western story
by Joby George
Description
Once upon a time in the West
Comments
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Javid Fathi
Interesting way to use the dialogue. To further the scene, you could have the sheriff character pass the wanted poster to his deputy in order to explain that he has a "code-name." Overall, however, this is a pretty good shot. Love the deputy's reactions.
Ivan Mendoza
The horse movement is very well done so as most of the characters' movements. However things like the tap on the back could use some improvement.
Ben Hall
I like how you were able to get alot of action in one shot
Brian W.
What an ambitious effort. Really nice work.