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Oddities
by Aly Killian
Children at the carnival watch as a carnie presents an oddity he found.
Comments
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Ivan Mendoza
The tap on the cage feels really nice. Other movements could use some improvement like the anticipation of the racoon before he starts speaking.
Michaela Wadzinski
I like the look of the crowd and the man's movements are great. But the lip sync seems to stop at his second line?
Vin Liew
need work on lipsync
Lea
You've got some charming poses here. Definitely a good start. Be careful with the eyes though, they're a bit all over the place.
Ben Hall
There is sudden speed ups and slow downs here and there needs to be some flow through although I love the raccoons expression and pose