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An Outlaw Name?!

by Giorgio Condè

Final Rating: 3.62. Finished #56 out of 80 entries.

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Animator

Giorgio Condè

Experience

2 months

Time Taken

11 Days

Description

An Outlaw Name...

Comments

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Richard Adams

Use of copyrighted characters, like Deadpool, not allowed in this contest

Michaela Wadzinski

The rendering is high quality, but I'd watch those shinier materials, they look great on surfaces but make characters appear to look plastic.

Daniela Lobo Dias

The way the characters freeze in their poses kinda has a cool effect, they kind of look like stop motion action figures. But if that was not your intention, I would add more continuous motion, so that even when they are standing still they are not perfectly froze. The pop the blond character does with his neck at the "HUH" is too much and distracting. I'd tone it way down and make it feel more natural.

Ben Hall

the motion doesn't have any ease in ease out making it look unnatural