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Fun Size
by M.O.
Description
Friends making halloween plans.
Comments
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Robert Allen
You should fix your sound output
Megan Menetrey
You should work on your shot planning. The first half looked pretty cool but after that I couldn't tell what was happening because Character 2 was standing still and not facing the camera.
Tom Islava
Not only does the timing have no weight to it at all but I can tell that you were animating just pose-to-pose without the straight-ahead because every body part finishes their actions on the same frame. There should be difference in how some of the body parts are timed