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Trick or Treat
Description
Witch girl becomes increasingly unamused by pompous ghost boy and his sidekick pumpkin head.
Comments
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Mike Schanbacher
The layout is there, and the story makes perfect sense, just needs to be fleshed out and finished.
Branden Blowey
Could use a background, but what's here is some great stuff. I'm a big fan of the character designs and movement, and jeez is that little fella adjusting his pumpkin mask just adorable.
Bret Kauppila
Pretty good body language in this one. I just wish I could see the guy's mouth as he speaks, as he's got the majority of the dialogue, so covering his mouth, while understandable in order to cut down on work, still feels kind of cheap.