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Too Old for Halloween

by Tal Minks

Final Rating: 3.43. Finished #55 out of 62 entries.

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Animator

Tal Minks

Experience

Intermediate

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Please Critique!

Comments

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Dave Roddick

What's he doing at the beginning?

Tom Islava

I know that in fr, 272 the guy is supposed to lean on the wall but it it looks like he's in front of her.

Dustin

Can't really tell where the main poses are because everything is just floating.

Anais Larocque

The way they move reminds me of astronauts on the moon.. It generally needs a more exciting timming. :) The personnalities of the characters are well defined !

Peyton Leatherman

All the movements are pretty slow and happen at the same time, try to vary timing! The staging here has potential.