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Tom's Candies
Tom is a Badboy...
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Robert Allen
So is she the candy bar?
Megan Menetrey
The lip syncing could be better, but the motion is fluid.
Brian Martinez
great job!
Vincent Henri Guillaume
a tad overanimated, but very good efforts
Pushparaj Shettigar
nice expressions loved it :)
Dustin
There's a lot of good stuff in here but it seems a little overdone in the middle for the way the character is speaking. That's just me, though. Also, why is a girl in the boys' locker room? haha
brezilian G
Great!!
Anais Larocque
Nice animation ! :D I wish the girl was a tiny bit more expressive, but it's only my opinion haha.
Eric De Carolis
nice render!
Some notes:
- both characters lip syncs are off
- the guys screen left eye is too far into his head most of the time
- some of the guys gestures are unclear. I dont know what gesture you are going for when he does that hand wave around frame 174
Myrel Talbaje
Wow
Jay Jay
I like it!
Bad boy and good girl
I like their animate style that based on their personality
Congratulation!
Farbian gasmin
Winner
Nice animate and Render❤️
leo sanchez
Fantastic job!! My favorite so far.
I like curve of boy's movement
Gabriel Hencz
The animation feels nice, but the lip sync is really off. I'd focus on that next time. Nice work though!
juan francisco leon
the winner
Mike Schanbacher
Nice work. The boy feels a little over-animated in places...the animation itself is great, but perhaps just a tad too energetic for the level of enthusiasm in the audio.
Edmond
not bad .