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Highschool Rejection
by Ryan R.
This is my first time uploading to 11 second club, I don't have much experience doing lip syncing so I already noticed a few errors I need to change. Any constructive criticism is appreciated
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Dave Roddick
I like the "full size candy bars" money gesture.
luke foster
Just like bad Think the expression like on the one with extra time with and some much like expression when it comes to this
Megan Menetrey
The guy's animations are good, but the girl is a bit stiff. It almost looks like one of her arms is glued to her shirt.
Samuel Bourland
I like you camera angles. But a moving camera says something. So unless you know what you're trying to say with a certain movement, it's best to just cut to different angles.
Bret Kauppila
That camera needs to ease in and out of its movements a little more.