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Lets Do It!!
by nishant
Planning to become reach.
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Ruben Uggla
I feel that you should either have established in the beginning that he was talking with two people or skipped one of them
Veronica Reeves
The character animation is decent, but the framing is quite jarring and could use a lot of improvement. For example, the second shot is too similar to the third shot and so having the two camera setups feels unnecessary and the cut is very distracting. The second shot begins with the character completely out of frame. They should already be in the frame for a cleaner cut on action. Finally, it is very confusing that there is a second red character in one shot and in the next shot they seem to be replaced by
a completely different character. Studying cinematography and editing could be quite helpful for improving your framing.
Eddie Higgenbottom
Like It!
Lea
the swap (?) between the red guy and the girl was super confusing.