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Let's go find the treasure!
by jinju
The pirate tries to persuade him to go for the treasure, but he's being rejected.
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Elisabeth Janerka
Super nice setup!
The main character's eyes could be a bit more alive. They stay the same size throughout the whole shot which makes them feel a bit stuck
Sarahrose Anderson
This is awesome! Only critique is when he says "ever", the arms can swing down a little earlier (like the beginning of the "ver" instead of the end of it) that would make it flow more and seem more natural
Jamie F
Nice!
Wang Cheng Will
I feel like the hand gestures should have came down as he says the words ever, and not before
Lea
It's SUCH a shame that the lipsync doesn't match up with the audio (looks like it's a few frames too early?) because the shot itself is really good!!
Edith Waititu
I like it because the motion feels fluid