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The hotel
The dialog between a girl and a boy!
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Jaime Santana
Your blockout for the guy is good enough to just be splined, man. Although I can see you put a lot of emphasis on her, and she moves awesome. I absolutely love that the guy rings the bell for her. Please send me a finished version, this is golden.
Jamie F
Lovely animation. But my first thought was that she's trying to check out his fingernails when she touches his hand. It's a little confusing
Beth Rowe
doesnt quite feel like completed anim on the guy. her hand poses seem quite broken. as shes coming forward on crime there seems to be a big pop in the shoulder
Jonathan Fontaine
Good start, the end is a bit confusing, the hip forward thrust on from 185 to 200 is a bit unnatural and lead to a not too readable pose around 211
the silhouettes on 211 is not very readable especially with the ring bell hiding part of the focus point (the two hands)
Alex Smith
animation is smooth, the guy seems to be in stepped. I'm a little confused about what's happening.