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And what terrible crime is that?
by Marisa
Description
Thank you for the opportunity!
Comments
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Jaime Santana
It's pretty floaty, and it looks like she's drinking a glass that isn't even there. I like the dog on the horse combo, but their dialogue and movement also feels floaty.
Deleted User
The camera angles are a bit confusing. It is easy to put the camera anywhere in 3d animation, but it might help the viewer if you keep all shots as if they were all shot from one camera that can turn but doesn't cross to the other side of the scene. The last shot, and the one of the feet seem to have crossed this plane, hopefully that makes sense. Other than that, the animation is very well done.