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CTRL-D Whoops
by Jacob Bish
Description
Bonnie admits to a small crime to Malcolm.
With this one I wanted to improve my blocking for camera angles since it was recommended last time I submitted. So hopefully that improved.
Bonnie Rig by Josh Sobel Rigs
Malcolm Rig by Animschool
Comments
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Guillermo Niño
Be careful with your staging. Try to have one character with more movemente at a time.
Jaime Santana
Try putting more breakdown poses inbetween each main pose. It's a little floaty. Points for the trippy idea.
John M
Remember to use the cinematography 180 degree rule for your shots.