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The Acqua Panna
Dana is trying to sell Acqua Panna to a lonely girl
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Jay
Love the water presentations/camera shift in this!
Ben Zingo
There's some really great work here!
Could be improved by brightening up the scene, and there's a bit of stiffness/weirdness towards the beginning where the body language doesn't read as well. But once you get into the exaggerated cartoony movement, it's pretty great! Love the staggered/delayed hand/write movements
Poppy Marlow
This one is pretty funny! Nice animation on Dana when she's showing the water types
Byron Pockrandt
Love it! Great work! The only critique I could give, is maybe give a little more emphasis when the waitress says "Voss" around frame 160.