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I'll just take a water
5 years of school acting classes
a little bit every day
A waitress tries to take an order.
Comments
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Ben Zingo
brightening up the scene with more lighting would help, as well as focusing on hitting key poses. Blocking out the movement to land on specific moments/actions will help your characters feel more decisive and a little less "floaty"
Byron Pockrandt
Would like to see more emotion in the characters and more eye contact between them. They look as if they're spacing out.
ro crown
Way too robotic of mood and movements...but if you did this in 2d drawn animation...do me, you would get a bigger and better score overall...just sayin' ..explore your options of animation story telling is all some of us suggest.
So only 5 stars from me.