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THE JUNE COMPETITION
by 朱村信
What happens when Spider-Man orders
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Byron Pockrandt
Some of the motions of the waitress as she's listing off the options, are lofty and floaty. The actions could go a little faster. Otherwise, pretty decent work. Make sure to get the whole clip in next time, it cuts off a little.
ro crown
The biggest fault that I find is not the customer that is of no lip sync styled....nor the lip sync [ or lack thereof] of the waitress....but the fact that the waitress DOES NOT PUSH HER HEAD forward for the accent on the AQUAPENNA is the best line .....outta the whole 11 sec's...another words, pay close actors type attention to what and the feel of the line is .....what I and others say for you to improve, if ya wanna.....so a low 4 star ratings from me....and you can always improve fast with 2d animation and get better scores.