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A strange restaurant
She went to a restaurant. Everything is strange. The server is even a little cranky. Will she be able to get out safely?!
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Dan Boot
nice flow and like the character style but the lack of eye contact brings it down. they seem disconnect from each other.
Ben Zingo
I'm very curious about the method of the animation, there's a certain blurry/hand-drawn feel to it, but other parts feel very digital. Dividing up the body parts into more layers, and focusing on moving them around (including use Anticipation, Easing, Overshoot, etc) will help your characters feel more lively and dynamic. Even just lifting/lowering the heads more, to add some extra secondary motion, will add a lot of extra interest. Keep it up!
Byron Pockrandt
Great clean lines. Not a lot of body movement which isn't bad but could definitely help make this pop more. The facial animation is fantastic. I like the art style as well. Very unique.
C h o c o b i l l y
This is GREAT! Love the characters. and their expressions. The waitress is awesome. This looks like it belongs in Bob's Burgers or similar type of show. Really well done ~
Luisa Schneider
The only thing distracting me is the person ordering not looking at the waitress, making it lok like an snl sketch