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Ordering a water
by Morgane Baud
Less than a year
About a week of seriously working on it
The awkward experience of ordering something simple in a really fancy place.
Comments
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ro crown
gave 5 stars due to the lack of acting choices because we can't see the waitress on the aquapenna is the best line....wel than is why the low score...sorry
Dan Boot
The emotion is a little flat
Byron Pockrandt
I appreciate the clean lines and shading. However, there's not much animation or movement happening. I would suggest researching more on mouth shapes. I appreciate the blink, but other than that, her eyes don't move which doesn't give us the feeling of life. Great form of the characters, but would like to see more movement.
Luisa Schneider
I think you can try putting more movement in the body and then adding facial expressions on top to make it more natural looking