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Kemet Intergration with water
by Will Oyowe
I love Egyptian stories and mythology so I decided to do a short scene from there. While I am happy with the acting, I didn't have time for a solid character design for the characters. It shows and I really need to up my clean-up game.
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ammon parkman
This is good. I like how the woman takes out her water from the basket and then her end line facial expression is the best really as it hits the subtext you are going for. There was one thing that was a bit distracting though, why are the back girls hands behind her back? Like it looks like she is tied up and trying to get out but still unclear at the same time. I would just use some simple hand gestures instead or put them on her lap in front of her.
Byron Pockrandt
Love the clean lines, coloring and shading! Great animation too! Keep an eye on the proportions and facial structure. It gets a little too fluid on the inbetweens. But great work all round!