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Dog manners
Description
When you want your dog to learn cat manners.
Comments
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Giancarlo Ferri
Has a lot of potential, the poses are good, but the movements need some improvement
Richard Adams
Lots of visual appeal.
Ariana Kanchuger
I love the story you told with this! Great staging at the beginning, and funny moment at the end. I would focus a bit on making sure your lipsync is very clear, there were some W’s without an o shape, some f’s without bottom lip on teeth, and some P’s without lips touching. If you add that in I think it would make it a lot more readable!
Jason
I love th poses, just adding a few more breakdown would make it that much better