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It was personal to ME!
by Danish Adeem
A very annoyed lady conversing with a really smug dude.
Hope you enjoy!
Comments
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Charlotte
The acting and expressions are nice, the timing is a little too even though. I like the framing.
david
was that intended??
Richard Adams
This came out extremely well animated! Top 5 entry
Danish Adeem
The shoulder on the dude seems to just glide down unnaturally at around frame 60.
The girl landing against the sofa could've also had more impact, as it looks a little too soft at the moment.
Sofia Dubinina
It is a great animation and the acting is on point. I got distracted with the clipping in the clothes too much to look at the face. I know that this rig is quite glitchy, but I'm sure there are some ways to fix it or cheat it.
I see really strong poses here. I love the acting choice for the guy.
Another thing. I think the expression on f 200-228 would be easier to read if the eyebrows would move after the head turn. Right now she turns and the left eyebrow is already down.
Ariana Kanchuger
oooo i love the expressions in this one!! and her little lean back into the couch is lovely.
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
A few clipping issues with the clothes that need to be solved; otherwise I'd have given this a higher rating.
Jose Velasquez
Good acting but you have some clipping going on with the female's shirt. It takes the viewer out of the scene.