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DATE NIGHT
Description
Its about a couple having their dinner on their date night in a restaurant
Comments
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Bob
When the girl points to the guy, it is too slow. Maybe it could be faster to make it a little less out of place
Charlotte
The animation is a bit stiff and glitchy, try working on your timing
Jason
you have an amazing start, the key poses are coming together and there's a good flow of the action. To make it Bette just try adding a few more breakdown poses and maybe play with the line of action a little more